Welcome to my website, detailing the adventures of Captain Esek Hrelle, his family, and the crew and cadets of his starship, the USS Surefoot. These stories are set in the 2360-70s, the Next Generation/DS9/Voyager Era.
When I wrote the first story, The Universe Had Other Plans, in the far off distant year of 2016, I never intended it to be a "first" story of anything. It was meant to be a one-off, a means of helping me fight writer's block on another project. I am amazed and delighted that it has taken on a life of its own, with an extended family of characters, places, ships and events.
The column on the right hand side groups the stories chronologically by significant events in Captain Hrelle's life (such as the command of a new Surefoot), as well as major events in the Star Trek timeline. The column on the left hand side lists reference articles, one-off stories, and a link to stories set on the USS Harken, a ship from decades before but with ties to the Surefoot Universe.
The universe of Star Trek belongs to CBS/Paramount; all of the original characters here belong to me. There is no explicit sexual content, but there are instances of profanity, violence and discussions of adult subject matters and emotional themes; I will try to offer warnings on some of the stories, but sometimes I forget.
I love comments (I don't get paid for this, sadly), so feel free to write and let me know what you think!
I loved this story. But then, I always love your stories. I get why Jhess wanted secrecy, but these are parents we're talking about. Fiercely protective parents. He should have been honest with them from the start. I'm happy for the guy, though, that the military folk are actually trying to help instead of just sweeping it under the rug and forgetting about their veterans, as too often happens in real life.
ReplyDeleteI like Jhess. Now he needs friends. Maybe a girlfriend. Or two...
Thanks, Christina! I had originally envisioned Jhess as being a secretly-trained agent of Ma'Sala's, whose skills would only come to the surface later in the series when needed.
DeleteAs for his decision to stay silent... he had been hurt, too many times, being torn from cubs he had taught and grown to care for because of the fears and hatred of their families. But I liked to turn the trope of the military conspiracy of silence on its head, from covering up the military records of their veterans for their own selfish ends, towards a more supportive stance for the vets, and I hoped that Jhess' final revelation was a bit of a surprise...
Unfortunately Christina, it happens all the time. Surefoot either had experience dealing with vets or has done some very extensive research, because the description Ma'sala gave was totally correct. The things they see and do in the warzone is not something that most civilians are comfortable knowing about, we all want or wars to be quick and tidy affairs that can be brushed over in the nightly news. Driving on patrol talking about what you're going to do when you get home to suddenly having an IED explode under you and you see your buddy next to you dead; being involved in a firefight while going door to door clearing out insurgents; watching a friend get shot and bleed out while the only thing you can do is apply pressure and tell him to hold on. These are some of the stories I've heard at the VA while volunteering. Nightmares about what happened, fireworks and movies triggering episodes, the drinking and self-medicating to try and cope all take a toll on a relationship, and what happened with Jhess and his family is not uncommon. And while we try to help and support them, a lot of that is from a distance because not all families are like the Hrelles, a lot of them don't want the potential ticking timebomb in their backyard or in their life.
ReplyDeleteSurefoot, as I said above, great job on showing effects that PTSD and other problems have in vets lifes. It was well handled and pretty accurate. I think Jhess will be a good addition to the crew (except that damn singing, lol).
ReplyDeleteAnd be sure to let me know when T'Varik is bringing her comedy show to a town near me so I can get tickets please.
P.S. I've said it before but will say it again, I love the artwork.
Thanks, David, I love reading your comments, and learning more about the people who read my work :-) I knew Vietname veterans when I was young, but it wasn't until much later when I began to better appreciate why they went away when the Fourth of July and New Year's Eve came along... or why they were always ended up violently arguing in their homes when relatives came visiting.
DeleteI really grew to love Jhess, the more I wrote about him. I love his vivacity and positivity and the genuine love and affection he has for cubs. And the more of a backstory I created for him, the more sorry I felt for him. Esek could have been him in another life, had he not left for Starfleet. And I'm glad he found a welcomgin, accepting family.
As for T'Varik's comedy, it's so dry her only venues will be on Vulcan...
I love the artwork, too - the one I found for Jhess inspired me to fashion his personality. I wish I could do with art what I do with words...
It is a sad fact that war veterans, those who put their lives on the line for others, are far too often shunned away by those same others once the wars are over... It seems, in the end, that very few people truly understand that war is not a gentleman's game, it's not nice and clean, never with fine gloves on.
ReplyDeleteI like that Maquis were included in the story. I often thought that there was more story potential for them in DS9.
A good story, I like it :)
Thanks, Todor, much appreciated! Yes, so many veterans lack acceptance and solidarity from society, so I'm glad that Jhess has a place with the Surefoot family...
DeleteIt was interesting to include the Maquis in this, given the timeline of events that were occurring at the start of the Dominion War, and their ultimate fate. It also portends what our characters will face when they go headlong against the Dominion itself...